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Wrath42k



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PostSubject: Furnher Kioken Application   Mon Aug 01, 2011 2:38 pm

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Basics


Name: Furnher Kioken
True Age: 8952
Gender: Male
Personality: Furnher, although very short tempered, is very reliable and trusting. He isnt always the smartest as far as knowing what to do when, but he follows orders from those he trusts and believes he should follow them from. Despite this though, in his eight thousand years plus of living, he seems to have a little trouble making friends, and those he does make end up falling out of contact with him and disappearing from his memory,Or lack thereof.

The friends he has had would describe him as the perfect soldier. If they asked him to do something and he agreed to do it, the job would get done no matter how badly in shape he would come back in. And he always recovered fairly quickly. He believes in the three strikes rule, many people have made it to two strikes, but no one thats known him have ever dared to go to the third strike. Because they fear of what might happen to him. If there was one thing that anyone would remember Furnher by, its the fact that once you've made him mad, its going to take alot to get back on his good side. For all of this he can be one of three things to any person. A good friend, your worst enemy, or a complete stranger. It all depends on how people act around him.



General Appearance

Appearance:
Without the goggles and he would have a gourd on his side, filled with mercury.

Animalistic Traits: He is loyal like a hound of the military, following orders to the best of his abilityies.
Appearance Age: With the pic about 24
Height: 5"11'
Weight: 190lbs.


Natural Abilities


Techinques:

Mercurial Control: Cienesq allows Furnher to control almost every aspect of the element mercury, he can control the temperature, shape, and whether its in a solid or liquid form. The speed at which the mercury can move is dependent on how focused Furnher is on moving the mercury, this also affects how long it takes for the mercury to harden. he uses the gourd on his side to produce the mercury for his abilities.

Magic: Mystical Imbuement: Over time Furnher learned that just physical strength with Cienesq's mercurial control wasent enough, he learned to channel some of his magical power to repel spiritiual and magical energy to a degree,creating a thin layer of power around his weapons and mercury armor, although imperfect, it does allow him to fight those who rely on spiritual and mystical energy. Allowing him to repel ceros and the such with little degrade to the imbuement, and able to fight off some stronger abilities with more degrade to the imbuement

Sacred Weapon: A staff with solid mercury tipped edges on either side.

Other Weapons: N/A

Guardian Beast


Element: Mercury

Guardian Beast: Cienesq, a serpent made out of the silver liquid mercury.

Guardian Beast's World: Many barren islands with silver water in between them, the beast hides underneath the water.

Sacred Unleashed


Joushou:("Ascending") Furnher's staff spits in half and the spikes on the ends grow, now forming two spears in his hands, the mercury covers his hands and forearm as protection. his speed with these dual spears is very quick, and can over power a lieutenant soul reaper simply defending in the course of three posts. if the tips of one of the spears penetrates skin, the mercury will seal over the wound and act like a tracer, the more hits he lands, the easier it is for him to hit. these tracers can be removed with simple forced removal, but the wound will still be in place until healed.

Zenou: ("Almighty") The two spears now meld with the mercury armor on his forearm and hands, and shorten, making them an extension of his arms. The armor forms farther along his body, covering the rest of his arms, his chest, and upper legs. his speed with spears is nearly doubled, and the tracers now act as an infection, after three posts the mercury will be fully injected into the opponents body, and start poisoning the opponent. after one post of being injected, the affected will start to feel fatigue. two posts, parts of affected's body will start to shut down. three posts the affected will be losing conciousness. four, the affected will be unconcious and on thier way to either death, or a coma.


Kyuu Kyou:("Ultimate") The mercury covers furnher's entire body, the spears drop off and form one large lance, his speed drops very slightly, but the armor is hardened three fold. the sheer power of him stabbing or slicing at someone spews mercury over the area he swung at, afterwards he can choose to freeze or heat up the mercury, to boil skin or freeze them solid.

Alter Form


Alter Appearance: The alter is slightly taller due to the inch or so thick mercury armor encasing furher, the mercury has a very shiny look to it, a clean reflection of everything around him in it. the lance stands as tall as him and has spines going down the sides of it so when he stabs someone, it will rip more of the person out as he retracts it.

Alter Personality: If there is a "Commanding Officer" around, he will wait for orders to kill, protect, etc,etc if he is on his own, depending on the state at which he entered his alter form, he could begin to smash everything around him, going on a blood crazed killing spree, or stand at attention, protecting something with his life.

Alter Powers:Complete mercury domination: He can create and destroy mercury from thin air, the speed at which the mercury moves and hardens is improved dramatically.

Mystical Empowerment: His mystical energy now can completely repel other energies from his mercury via the same way he does with mystical imbuement, except the sheet is thicker and much more potent, and he can spread this energy to other objects at the cost of weaking it from his mercury.


Past & Roleplay Sample


Character Background: Furnher, having no recollection of how he became the being that he was,or even what had happened before that, began to wander around the world, trying to find out what happened, and what he was. He traveled to many places, searching for people like him, but unable to easily find them. He eventually got a hint at a town in the western US to go to japan and seek out a village known as, Shakamikune. When he finnaly found the village, he found many people just like him, he instantly went to talk to anyone he could find to figure out what he was, he spoke to an old man named Furnes, who taught Furhner about himself, his abilities, and what his race was.
After a long time of teaching Furhner the old man realised he never asked for the mans name, and when he asked he couldnt get an answer because the man didnt know, So the old man decided to take on the man as his son and gave him the name Furhner Kioken.

Some time after the old man who was Furhners father passed away, Furhner left the town he had seemingly claimed as his home, out to meet new people, and learn more about the creatures of the world he lived in, because now he knew that there was more than humans in the world. His traveling brought him all around the world, meeting many new people, but none quite like the ones he wanted to meet, until he came across Kurakara town. There he began to see large monsters being slain by people in black robes, he questioned why there weren't people screaming everywhere by the monster, but then he realized it must be because of the power he had, and the people in black robes must be similar.

After a long time of learning about the people in robes, he learned they were called "Soul reapers" and they fought against the monsters and many other things, so now he lives in kurakara, learning more about them and constantly growing his own strength. His story grows with the people he meets and the soldier he fights as to protect those people.


Roleplay Sample: Furnher slid his staff along his arm, preparing for combat against some muggers trying to rob from a woman "Just Stay back ma'am, ill handle them" as the muggers came at him with swift blows he tripped one over his staff and disarmed another by cracking a bone in his forearm, forcing him to drop his weapon. He turned to the two remaining muggers and glared at them with fierce eyes "So, are you two going to try at me as well? or are you going to end up the same as the others" as he spoke he motioned to the men lying on the ground in pain. The remaining two stared at Furher for a moment before running, running for thier lives that they feared for.

Furher turned to the woman he was proctecting and offered to help her up. She took his hand and stumbled to her feet."Uh..Thank you sir, im not sure what i would of done if you hadn't came along". The woman spoke with a low and slightly shakey voice."Its nothing ma'am, i really just couldnt leave those thugs to prey on who ever they wish to, they've been a trouble around here for a good while." The two spoke for a little bit and then Furhner went on his way, off to train some more before he ventured to find out more about the soul reapers.


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PostSubject: Re: Furnher Kioken Application   Mon Aug 01, 2011 3:12 pm


  • Name [X]

  • Appropriate Age [X]

  • Gender [X]

  • Picture/Equivalent Sentences for Appearance [x]

  • 10 sentences for personality [o]

  • History is of appropriate length [x]

  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [o]

  • Powers are described reasonably enough [o]

  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]

  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]

  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [o]

    Well...Lets start here...


    1. Your Personality isn't Ten Sentences..It could be but too many Run-on's
    2. Your Mercury powers in Your Zenou Form are a bit Over powered. Giving someone a Poison is one thing, But When your trying to make it so the person is completely Incapacitated after four posts is a Big no no. Please Change
    3. Does He summon the Mercury himself or does he use the mercury around him ? Please Explain a bit more.
    4. In your Joushou form, What allows him to Overpower something by defending for Three posts ? Once again more explanation (chew)
    5. Mystical Imbuement: Over time Furnher learned that just physical
      strength with Cienesq's mercurial control wasent enough, he learned to
      channel some of his magical power to repel spiritiual and magical energy
      to a degree, although imperfect, it does allow him to fight those who
      rely on spiritual and mystical energy- How high of a Level can he Repel ? explain further.

    6. Your RP sample isn't Ten Sentences...I only counted 8 (chew) Please Fix


      Until it tis Fixed...

      Tier: N/A



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PostSubject: Re: Furnher Kioken Application   Tue Aug 02, 2011 3:16 am

Seems like everything is Meow ! SOOOO!


Tier: 2-2

Enjoy your time here =3

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PostSubject: Re: Furnher Kioken Application   Wed Sep 21, 2011 3:41 am

moved to inactive

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